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Monday, April 20, 2009
Jiahui's assignment 9
My topic is Amir and Soraya(his wife). They had some similar parts, like each of them had a bad past. However, they had a lot of differences, such as their attitudes to bad things, their relationships with their families, their temperaments.
Jiahui, you have plenty of good points to go on here, but you need to form them into a coherent thesis statement!
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