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Monday, April 20, 2009
Assignment 9 form Xinyue
My topic is about today’s Amir and yesterday’s Amir. The book tells us how Amir grows up and his experience in his life. It is clearly to find how they changed and what is still same. How he treat people around him, his mind, and his actions.
we have a similar topic and we have tons of examples to use.But i think we may gain some ideas from their finical situation coz they had a lot of problems to sovle as the poor in America.
Xinyue, this is an excellent start! The only problem I have is that "how he treats people" and "his actions" are pretty much the same thing. I think that you should replace one of these with something else. You could look at his family, his relationships, his social status, his religion, his nationality, etc.
we have a similar topic and we have tons of examples to use.But i think we may gain some ideas from their finical situation coz they had a lot of problems to sovle as the poor in America.
ReplyDeleteXinyue, this is an excellent start! The only problem I have is that "how he treats people" and "his actions" are pretty much the same thing. I think that you should replace one of these with something else. You could look at his family, his relationships, his social status, his religion, his nationality, etc.
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