Monday, April 20, 2009

Dana‘s comparative/contrast essay

My topic is young Amir vs old Amir

There are similarities and differences between adult amir and child amir. We can see similarities both ways as physical and mental. Amir has changed a lot since his childhood, but at the meantime, he still doesn't stand for anyone and doesn't want to take risks. Some of his behaviour is remains from his childhood.

2 comments:

  1. I agree with your opinion that we should see Amir from two sides,the same and the changes. However, I think the changes is more obviously than the same because Amir try his best to atone the crime he did to Hassan even he scared. I think he become a brave man after he grown up.

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  2. Good topic - but you don't have a coherent thesis yet. I'm not sure physical & mental are the best points to look at in regards to the differences between adult and child. You could talk about personality, relationships, interests/hobbies, environment, etc. Physical and mental are too broad.

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