A group of students learning and thinking and writing together.
Monday, April 20, 2009
LI
My topic is "BaBa's lifetime" From Gabul to USA, BaBa life change a lot, from a rich and be respected man become a nomore old man even when he sick he did not have money to saw the doctor.Big downs and ups of his life.
Li, make sure you include differences AND similarities. You can't just look at ways he has changed, you also need to look at ways he is the same. Clover offers you some very good suggestions - you might look at his role in society, cultural, and his relationships to different people. You can compare these in the US vs. Afghanistan.
I like this topic, actually i'm doing the same topic and i have a comments on this, first i think its better if you say Afghanistan vs America because they both are countries. second you may want to add some things that didn't change even when he moved to the U.S.
This is a good topic, baba's life shows reality of society, and refer to the background including cultural and peopelw of the story.
ReplyDeleteI agree with you.
ReplyDeleteLi, make sure you include differences AND similarities. You can't just look at ways he has changed, you also need to look at ways he is the same. Clover offers you some very good suggestions - you might look at his role in society, cultural, and his relationships to different people. You can compare these in the US vs. Afghanistan.
ReplyDeleteI like this topic, actually i'm doing the same topic and i have a comments on this, first i think its better if you say Afghanistan vs America because they both are countries. second you may want to add some things that didn't change even when he moved to the U.S.
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