Monday, February 9, 2009

assignment 3

Xiaohan Hu
College writing essay
Narrative Essay
February 09, 2009


I think Amir and Hassan are real friends, their children friendship rise above rascial prejudice and rank gap, maybe they are just too young to figure out their tightness relationship. Although Hassan has no choice to settle the problem of racial prejudice, either did Amir. Environments and time are pushing them without a clear direction. From some spots like when other children are bullying Hassan, they just feel scared and lost. It is reasonable in such an age and such a situation. It is easy to make readers have a soft place in their heart. War is always cruel we can see from these children.However, I believe author is trying to show major projects from minor ones. The story between Amir and Hassan is accumulated by these experiences. I can see Hassan is deeply fond of Amir. What is more, although Amir has not of his own free will to have a normal friendship with Hassan. They are just innocent children, have to face these completed situation. Sad, hopeful,hopeless… just like the name of this book.

2 comments:

  1. there's no clear example to support the idea.

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  2. Xiaohan, you raise some good points, but need to work on UNITY - focus on one idea and stick to it. You try to fit too many ideas into one blog entry!

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