Sunday, March 8, 2009

LI Assigment 6

Gun shoot is not singularity in american. because anyone is lawful possession of a firearm. because of they have guns, so when they quarrel with each other easy to angry and shoot each others.so i do not agree with american low which one is allow people have guns.Although American is freedom country, citizen have their droit to protect their free,when they are can't adapt of goverment, they can use gun fight with goverment.this is good thing, because this low american do not afraid of their bad goverment, but as we know gun is dangerous weapon, it can easy to kill people,this is why american have high shoot crim rate. good people use gun to protect themselves,bad guys use gun to kill. In my opinion the disadvantages outweigh the advantages. now in american is peaceful country, here no war or social unrest, so gun is not necessary.but they want proteck themselves how can they do?i think american people should set up a body. this organization for the stockpiling of weapons in peace time and with civilian management no goverment cotrol. when they need against with goverment or something then the organization will give them weapon to fight. if like this people will more safe and relax than now.

1 comment:

  1. Great topic! You don't need to write all your supporting ideas here, though. This is just to write your topic, opinion, and why you chose it. So you wrote more than you needed to. You need to work on creating a more focused thesis statment. The sentence "so i do not agree with american low which one is allow people have guns" is a good start. We will work on this in class Tuesday.

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